A COUNTRY I'D LIKE TO VISIT
Hi everyone! I always think about which country I'd like to visit. When I was younger I read and learn about other cultures. When I have five years old, my dream was visit Egypt! My mom bought me books and I spend watching the huges constructions, pyramids and the paintings inside them.
My favorites things about Egypt are the mummies and pyramids. All the process to make them is amazing! One time at the Louvre's, I see an exposition about Egyptian culture. I almost cried, the dream of my life was a little closer.
Ancient Egyptian culture flourished between c.5500 BCE (so old!!) and 30 BCE with the death of Cleopatra VII.
When I finally make that trip, I'll be crying like a baby. Walking and feeling the air there is my biggest dream!



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